Thursday, 17 November 2016

Animatic (Timings need refining)

1 comment:

  1. Overall your film reads well but we need a little more time at the end with the award winning garden after the reveal (its vital to the film. Infact we need to stay with it for a few seconds /shots to see its beauty. You could explore an approach using close ups of flowers (simple camera pushes and pulls on flowers etc) to show the garden and then back to the reaction of the granny/ judges. Don't worry about going over the 1.30 time limit, make it work and then we'll see if we can trim elsewhere.